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Remotely Funny Poor Timing(Haiku)

by Robin Patterson


Vibrations fill me
Red lights stop my speeding car
Where is that remote?

12/28/2005

Author's Note: This is meant as a tongue in cheek really. Sometimes in life you just wish you could hit the rewind on the remote and "do over" and sometimes you just need to steal the batteries!;)

Posted on 12/28/2005
Copyright © 2024 Robin Patterson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/28/05 at 07:33 PM

Oh yea...but, you've captured it so well! Really enjoyed this. Nice writing.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/28/05 at 08:54 PM

Yes! Yes! I remember those days...although they haven't happened for awhile, because buses don't get too many speeding tickets. I love your ability to look at a serious situation and find a bit of humor in it.
~Chelle~

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