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As far as I can get away from me.

by Robin Patterson

Eyes closed. Relaxed. A cool wind blows. Cocooning my body. I am lifted. Invisible. Surrounded. Safe. Trusting. I become the wind. Drift and glide. Deeper still. Oneness. Silence. Lost in its calm. Uncertain. I pull away. Confused. Uncomfortable. Awareness suspends me. Interrupts. Eyes open. I sink. Alone.

12/26/2005

Posted on 12/27/2005
Copyright © 2024 Robin Patterson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sam Roberts on 01/07/06 at 05:05 PM

This is a great piece, so honest in it's portrayal. I like how you've structured the poem, breaking the rules! Lovely, stay beautiful xoxoxox

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