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SWEET GIRL HAIKU
by Terry OlynikWhat you feel is me
As you sleep so far away
Kissing your closed eyes 12/17/2005 Author's Note: Delirious Haiku
Posted on 12/17/2005
Copyright © 2024 Terry Olynik
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/20/05 at 09:32 PM So romantic and it could be for anyone of us who wish for kisses in the night. You're simply amazing.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 12/23/05 at 01:09 AM Hmm. My husband tried this once. A BIG mistake for I woke up in the middle of slapping him away - we had a new, very licky puppy at the time who hadn't yet learned how to behave around sleeping humans.
Lovely small poem. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/23/05 at 02:06 AM Funny guy...but a true romantic. You're okay, Terry, and this is great! |
| Posted by Carolyn Coville on 12/27/05 at 12:54 PM sweet and sensual, i like this! |
| Posted by Bethany Lee on 10/08/07 at 06:34 PM short, soft, sweet. This one felt like a down-filled pillow under my head. |
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