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My blood was warm, yours was cold

by Rebecca Lin

The river flowed
crimson streaks.
My blood was warm.

Oozing currents
dripped forth
from your mouth.
Running, pouring
into pools of
your fluorescent
dignity.

I could say
the blood came from down there,
but I wouldn't want to frighten you.

One minute fine,
the next,
I'm gone.
I hate my existence.
No I don't.
I'm the fairest,
a swan.

You're a dragon...
I know you are.
You lure me so,
then watch me burn.
Fiercely hot, but
your blood was cold.

12/11/2005

Author's Note: Mike

Posted on 12/11/2005
Copyright © 2024 Rebecca Lin

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tom Goss on 12/13/05 at 09:01 PM

Vivid, pleasantly parsimonious. It sounds great spoken aloud too.

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