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john, I'm only dancing*

constantly stare
at my dress size
just once, wish
youd notice
the ring of green
around the
brown of my eyes

12/07/2005

Author's Note: *david bowie

Posted on 12/08/2005
Copyright © 2025 Vere Mantratriad

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/08/05 at 06:33 AM

that is an excellent song, and this is an excellent piece... indeed... blessings...

Posted by Anne Boulender on 07/17/06 at 04:55 AM

nail on head, much like dorothy parker for those times when she was serious.

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