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"Gravity on My Mind"

by Max Phineas

Beyond the mind there is disaster,
Beyond disaster lies thought.

Below the surface our words are engrained
In memories long forgotten.

In thought we seek shelter
Though its brittle walls only support so much

Before interstellar forces;
The workings of the universe
Like time-travel, transport us
Back to reality.

Beyond the mind there is disaster,
In disastrous thought do we remain unchanged.

12/08/2005

Author's Note: Well, it makes sense to me...

Posted on 12/08/2005
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rebecca Lin on 12/10/05 at 05:31 AM

That's amazing! I'm so impressed with the last stanza!

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