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most days I feel like this

by Ava Blu





watching your body float by,

I grieve for a second;



would have been longer

if your eyes weren't always closed.







12/06/2005
Author's Note: and I will leave even though you hear it not tip toe, tip toe slipping right from under your nose

Posted on 12/06/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Wendy Geal on 12/06/05 at 10:20 PM

so powerful for such a short piece.

Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 12/08/05 at 06:45 AM

funny, I just wrote a poem about eyes being open/closed

Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 12/15/05 at 11:04 PM

Such powerful, profound brevity.

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