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Anthem/Feral Grin

by Arthur Parten

Sparks fly out from steel and stone
in measure with each foot striking the ground
all impurities frightened away by the brightness
as man waxes godlike with armor and adrenaline

12/03/2005

Author's Note: Just a beginning

Posted on 12/04/2005
Copyright © 2024 Arthur Parten

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jim Benz on 12/04/05 at 06:14 AM

I don't know if you mean these four lines are just the beginning of a longer poem, but they stand pretty darn good all by themselves. Nice job.

Posted by Katerina T Nix on 11/30/06 at 01:43 AM

Great piece, Arthur. I really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing your words. -Kat :)

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