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Shadows of Friendship

by Amy Niggel

A shadow fell across my heart
in the shape of your form
it cooled the warmth I had built up
left me shivering as realization dawned
every time I stood up
you stepped back
to let me take the fall
and shoulder the blame
you always said I was the irresponsible one
this time you were right

12/01/2005

Author's Note: somedays my friends just really suck

Posted on 12/02/2005
Copyright © 2021 Amy Niggel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/02/05 at 02:46 AM

Amy, I love the way this poem evolves as I read it. Light bulbs go on, flash bulbs (if they still exist) go off. Nice writing.

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