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MOMENT 14

by Graeme Fielden



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I


WO


NDER


IF THE


STARS LOOK DOWN FROM THE SKY


TO EARTH. VEER FROM THEIR


C E L E S T I A L


ORBITS: COLLIDING WITH


COMETS ; DISTRACTED BY THE


BEAUTY


OF YOU


AND


I


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


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12/01/2005

Author's Note:

Posted on 11/30/2005
Copyright © 2024 Graeme Fielden

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/30/05 at 04:58 PM

Another brilliant moment, Graeme, for the stars are the poetry of heaven.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/01/05 at 02:03 AM

Very clever formatting. I see in this a touch of irony and some tongue in cheek! It is quite humorous as well. (Now if you are being serious forgive me!)

Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/01/05 at 03:59 AM

This poem begins and ends with 'I'. This is very profound. We are the beginning and the ending of perception and beauty..... but we are inherently alone --even when together. This one tears me. Great work.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/02/05 at 01:51 PM

this is so beautiful... i needed to see this today... i too wonder what the stars "see" when they look down... something to dream off... blessings...

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 12/05/05 at 07:00 AM

absolutely brilliant sir! clever form, and wonderful thought... inspires some thinking in me... thank you as always for sharing.

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