Amanda, I can feel your pain through your words. And maybe in some ways, it could relate, although not directly to other situations. I like what you did with the topic and hope it helped you in some small measure.
~Chelle~

I like that the final stanza isn't what we expect after reading the first, that the invasion of your space led to calm. However, while the shortness is nice and attention-catching, I think it could stand to be a tad more descriptive. Still, lovely work.