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Shards

by Tota Longmire

Hurting

Tears falling

Shattering
Cutting me

Tiny little shards of
Exquisite pain
Driven deeper

See the red
Cry the harder

Little drops of
Dangerous aching

Shattering
Cutting me

11/14/2005

Posted on 11/15/2005
Copyright © 2024 Tota Longmire

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 11/15/05 at 07:01 AM

Well written, tactile. I could almost feel little cuts. Fantastic!

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