Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 11/28/05 at 05:33 PM this is a classic piece. accessible and interesting to all. tightly written without ego or excess. incredible lines...People walked by in patterns-... Quivering lip and little purse, (my fave. god, what an amazing image, it just solidifies the feeling so well, the vulnerability, and the inability to move...to become a statue, the wall itself....it bled for its sin -- yea! perfect!...and, i love surprise endings. all the more shocking because of how well you set me up! this is a classic piece. i wouldn't change a thing. my vote for POTD. |