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love notes

by Philippa Jane

please remember the
way my name falls from your tongue,
your breath softening

every consonant,
the vowels suddenly rounder
when between your lips.

11/10/2005

Posted on 11/10/2005
Copyright © 2024 Philippa Jane

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rula Shin on 11/10/05 at 05:22 PM

What a soft and lovely piece you have here. A name is more than a name when it is Love personified which utters the presence and essence of Being on its lips. The name becomes an expression of the joy and beauty of Love, the name ceases to be a word, and becomes true Art. Beautifully expressed.

Posted by Anya Kaats on 02/23/12 at 02:05 PM

so poignant.

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