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1% Reality

by Ava Blu




his voice sticks to her lungs
as she remembers redemptions she
never could believe in

[breathe it in, take him out]






what are you waiting for?

11/05/2005

Author's Note: repeat the above 6 times until you start fading into the background of his soul

Posted on 11/05/2005
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joseff Marat on 11/05/05 at 10:54 PM

Wow - he must have a magnificent voice. I bet he's really good looking too.

Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 11/09/05 at 05:06 AM

"his voice sticks to her lungs"... wonderful image. how are you?

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 11/21/05 at 06:38 PM

sounds just about right to me... reality is over-rated anyway... fantastic write.

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