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1% Reality
by Ava Blu
his voice sticks to her lungs
as she remembers redemptions she
never could believe in
[breathe it in, take him out]
what are you waiting for?11/05/2005
Author's Note: repeat the above 6 times
until you start fading into
the background of his soul
Posted on 11/05/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joseff Marat on 11/05/05 at 10:54 PM Wow - he must have a magnificent voice. I bet he's really good looking too. |
| Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 11/09/05 at 05:06 AM "his voice sticks to her lungs"... wonderful image. how are you?
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| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 11/21/05 at 06:38 PM sounds just about right to me... reality is over-rated anyway... fantastic write. |
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