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by Frank Lee

i say hello to a stranger
who thinks before she speaks
and only smiles as her words repeat
her retreat into silence
so i sing a song

hoping someone will sing along
but instead people just stare
scared
to say
hello (hello)

Hop off the bus
avoid fuss
as the glow of the night embraces me
i gaze at the stars
for a moment forget all my scars
for once it all seems serene

i whisper a song
hoping the clouds will sing along
and say hello to a stranger
who hangs there head, embarrassed
it's impolite to notice anothers existence

in todays society
people are obsessed with individuality
but untouched by originality
ev'ryone is mimicking television
that is mass produced by conglomerates (all for profit)

i walk into my home and cook a dish of lasagna
play guitar till my hands bleed
then drink till i forget
repeat
then hop back on the bus

where people sit in silence
lost in the sound of their headphones
trying not to look at anyone
meet eyes
afraid of being vulnerable

i say hello to a stranger
who thinks before she speaks
and only smiles as her words repeat
her retreat into silence
so i sing a song

hoping someone will sing along
but instead people just stare
scared
to say
hello (hello)

11/04/2005

Posted on 11/04/2005
Copyright © 2024 Frank Lee

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Deborah Breuer on 10/30/06 at 10:53 AM

It gave me chills...REally it did. I think this piece speaks volumes in truth and people should be hit over the head with it. The other day I was in a state other than mine and was astonished to the reactions I got when saying hello to a stranger, or opening a door for an older couple. It kinda made me sad, really. Anyway, I think your poem is great and I'm adding it to my favorite's...Congratulations on a great piece and be proud...ya did good. Thanks, Debbie

Posted by Angie Jenkins on 02/13/10 at 03:55 AM

Wonderful. People are so afraid to open up in fear of looking abnormal, when really the strange thing is that we don't try harder :) I loved this poem, great write!

Posted by Mo Couts on 06/18/11 at 04:30 AM

I love this! Yes, we should all be more mindful of saying 'hello'! Fabulous read!

Posted by Ava Blu on 07/06/11 at 02:26 AM

This is brilliant.

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