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gladly loosened grip.

by Melanie J Yarbrough

I knew you were bound to fade
eventually,
and there you are:
an old pair of jeans.

11/04/2005

Posted on 11/04/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melanie J Yarbrough

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 11/08/05 at 08:27 PM

oohhh i didn't see the end coming with this; nice transition to jeans.

Posted by Paul Marino on 01/28/06 at 03:22 PM

i forgot to tell you at the time i first read this how much i liked it. it's close to a tanka, but not really. good. good. good.

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