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Would You Care to Dance?

by Tota Longmire

Life is quicker at eighteen.
My song and dance I must perform.
Would you claim me as a partner
In this waltz of life, if only for a while?
Your step may be a little slower
Than the way I'm used to twirling.
I can slow down and let you lead
If only you'll promise to waltz with me.

11/02/2005

Posted on 11/03/2005
Copyright © 2026 Tota Longmire

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Corey Lockaby on 11/03/05 at 04:11 AM

I like it. It wraps up very nicely and keeps well. Love your work, Tota. And you, Tota. :P

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