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by Ava Blu

she's snorting lines again
trying to close windows.


Author's Note: she never wanted them to be open.

Posted on 10/21/2005
Copyright © 2021 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/21/05 at 10:54 PM

...jeanna, this is short buuuut seriously meaningful...i love the visuals...and the extended meaning by using the word "trying" to close windows...there's just something about the in-the-process-of kind of thingee...been there, done that...a wonderfully full poem with just a few words...great work, peace, chaz

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