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This Ring On My Finger

by Jersey D Gibson

This ring on my finger,
I've worn it on my hand,
since that day you gave it to me.

This ring on my finger,
I've never taken it off,
since the day you put it on.

It's been a while,
since that day,
and the ring shows the time.

It's not as polished,
as when you got it,
no longer a bright silver band.

It's got a dent in it,
who knows where from,
that I consider a beauty mark.

My finger is now tough,
callous on both sides,
with a tan line in between.

I've worn it cross-country,
I wore it in exercize,
no matter how dirty it got.

I've worn it repelling,
I wore it digging,
I even hit someone with it in a fight.

I've worn it in good times,
I've worn it through bad times,
I kissed it when we said good-bye.

You wear this ring's twin,
on your own finger,
gave to you that very day.

I know it wasn't much,
but it was the thought that count,
your eyes told me it was true.

What this ring represents,
isn't the money we spent for it,
but the commitment we stood for.

We've been through thick,
we've been through thin,
and we been through worse than that.

Now that we're apart,
I promised that I'd return...



why do you want to give it back?

10/10/2005

Posted on 10/10/2005
Copyright © 2024 Jersey D Gibson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Amanda L Marron on 10/10/05 at 03:49 PM

Wow, Jersey. Your emotional track runs straight through this piece to the very end. As I have said before and will tell you until you finally get it through that jar head of yours.....you are brilliant.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/11/05 at 04:25 AM

Great Jersey, I love this...

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/11/05 at 04:26 AM

...and stay safe

Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 10/11/05 at 06:49 PM

right at this very second in my life I know exactly how this feels. especially in the end. Nice stuff

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/12/05 at 11:23 PM

...ahhh dannngit, i was swallowed by the love your laced, like karo syrup[it just softly flowed] and i reckoned back when my blah, blah...bubba, what a delightfully lilting and yet hurting set of words...terrific, but painful ride of the "thicks" and the "thins"...peace at you, chaz

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