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"Take My Breath Away"

by Max Phineas

Drowned in your smile
Enchanted by your laughter
Heart melts in my chest

10/09/2005

Posted on 10/09/2005
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rebecca Lin on 10/10/05 at 01:40 AM

Simply touching ^^

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/12/05 at 07:26 PM

Love is strong in your lines. Each word emphasizes an emotional connection. Beautiful!
~Chelle~

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