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Mouth of the Well by Jim BenzI stand on the peak
of Kukúlcans pyramid,
looking east
to the Mayan ball court, gazing
on its half crumbled temples.
I feel nothing
of the past, only distance
and a sobering wind.
Behind me, a woman is sobbing.
The acoustics
of the pyramid amplify
her vertigo. With each stammer
of terror that escapes from her mouth,
a remembrance is stirred
in the diffident sky.
I don't know how
she climbed this monument
of Mayan culture, this calendar
of the seasonal march, but soon
she must descend.
Below, on the ground, tourists
crane their necks
under the suns blistering glare
to see a woman collapsed
beneath the hysterical weight of her fear.
Someone takes a picture of her
sitting on the humid stone platform, quaking,
with knees
pulled tight to her chest.
Her husband tries to comfort her
and kneels
at her side, pleading
gently in German
but I understand none of it
so I clap my hands
and hear the Quetzal bird
shrieking,
an echo of stone. It rings
through the engraved rock temple
at the apex, a spirit
of Maya, sacrificed
by decimation, torn
from the misery of victims, shattered
in a heap below.
Deep within the structure,
a green jaguar waits, with Chaac-Mool,
for a camera click.
10/04/2005 Author's Note: Still a work in progress. Suggestions or criticism are welcome and appreciated here.
Posted on 10/04/2005 Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/04/05 at 06:41 PM ...sorta what donC says...wouldn't change a thing...well, maybe the author, i'd put me nahahaha...good one jim...good one...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 10/04/05 at 08:01 PM Not over-blown in my opinion - rather, vivid. I like it. |
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