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Love at first sight

by Keith D Allison

The enchantment
The sparkling of jewels in night sky
The winds of life that caress the cheek
Flirtations only flirtations

Eyes caught in that moments breath
Passions and heat of summer wind
Pedals dropping upon the mind
Love caressing love in itself

Shadows in the seed of death
The wonder of nothing known
The infatuation of the bloom not the flower
The fluttering the butterfly wings

Taste of ice cream
Unfortunately the wrong flavor for most
The allusion ending and quiet drops of rain
The song with rhythm the melody not found

The thrill of the motion ride
The stone is not genuine
The genuine is more than a romantic feeling
Or the cinnamon of the night wind

10/02/2005

Posted on 10/02/2005
Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 09/04/09 at 04:34 PM

I really like this, Keith!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/04/09 at 06:29 PM

"...cinnamon of the night wind," that's a fascinating line! Congrats of potd with this!

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/07/09 at 03:07 AM

Ihre Zeilen der Liebe sind sehr schön!!! (Your lines of love as so beautiful Keith!)

Posted by Kristen Heyl on 05/15/10 at 12:52 AM

Great visuals. I have a question. Is "pedals" supposed to be "petals"?

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