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Twilight's Bliss

by Mark Maxey

Tonight I sit under the stars and moon
Wondering if I will ever see you return
No twisted thoughts or curiosity
Just simple thoughts of mystery

Once you were in the midst
Between cultures lost
It seemed you were in an abyss
One simple move was all it cost
And now all I have are memories

Miles away among the trees
I ponder if you miss the bliss
Or are they golden leaves
Among simple lists

Tonight I sit under the stars and moon
Wondering if I will ever see you return

09/25/2005

Posted on 09/26/2005
Copyright © 2024 Mark Maxey

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 09/26/05 at 09:08 PM

Well done...I often wonder does the one loved, love back as well?

Posted by Jim Benz on 10/13/05 at 03:30 AM

nice reverie. when I read it, I can feel myself in the woods, reflective, with a fond pain in my heart. did you consider making this into a sonnet? you're so close already, and the form would be perfect for what you express.

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