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Bugger Off

by Anita Mac

My face,
it's not perfect,
you know.
And people,
they don't always
come in pairs.
And me,
well...

09/22/2005

Posted on 09/23/2005
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 09/23/05 at 03:21 AM

i do like this, but i would take off the "well...i'm me" part. i just think it drags it on when this is one of those snippet poems that's better short. =)

Posted by Christina Bruno on 09/26/05 at 09:18 PM

you're good just the way you are ;)

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