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! i

by Ava Blu




i am

an exclamation point

e
d
i
s
p
u

d
o
w
n

but i would rather be
the

u e
q s
t
i
o
n

mark

around your hips.

09/05/2005

Author's Note: an "i" is just an exclamation point upside down. def= "to indicate forceful utterance"

Posted on 09/06/2005
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 09/06/05 at 02:01 PM

so interesting. wonderful- my eyes thank you

Posted by Michael Faraday on 12/30/05 at 03:51 AM

concrete... :)

Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 11/18/07 at 02:04 AM

Awwww...

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/24/09 at 04:13 PM

Clever/clever, and it's a good line on top of that.

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