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lost weight when you let go

by Ava Blu


09/03/2005

Author's Note: the best is now on my tongue. (hmm new title now...suggestions?)

Posted on 09/04/2005
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rula Shin on 09/06/05 at 02:44 AM

Wow, raw is right. Well when we don't make things happen we let the happenings happen to us. A powerful ressurgance of happening in the end.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/06/05 at 02:56 AM

you will get what you gave me yes, we reap what we sow negative vibrations can't generate positive feelings, when we lets thing happen and dont endeavor to UNDO.

Posted by Anita Mac on 09/06/05 at 04:05 AM

I'm diggin this new form thing you've got going on. Still... something of your substance is missing, I think... Can't put my finger on it, though.

Posted by Michael Faraday on 12/30/05 at 03:47 AM

dig the visual

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