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Picnic Memories (First Haiku)

Picnic Memories
Crumbs float in the squash bottle
Wasps on the jam tarts!

08/31/2005

Posted on 08/31/2005
Copyright © 2024 Dave Fitzgerald

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Alisa Js on 12/14/06 at 01:29 AM

lol.. I bet this was some memory!... aloha..;-)

Posted by Phil P Robson on 11/04/09 at 09:43 PM

This must be something that everyone has experienced but it is phrased so personally, I enjoyed this very much.

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