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don't comment on my wounds by Ava Bluyour handwriting seems rehearsed;
line breaks off center and
the curvature looks forced
(why does it feel familiar?)
i didnt reword to fit your page,
but i understand why youd think that
i see adjectives attached to your windows,
pulling verbs as you sleep;
it's the only way to make the nouns fit
08/30/2005
Author's Note: unfinished.
Posted on 08/30/2005 Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
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