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If You're Hard To Follow Then I Must Be Completely Off The Grid
by Howard F Farewell Even though we both know better than the other
Or think we know everything we dont want to
Shaking ourselves dry from a swim to salvation
After basking in the sun of angels
Im still writing short stories
And your producing novels 08/28/2005 Author's Note: part 3 as the cycle goes on, see r.kinser for part 4
Posted on 08/27/2005
Copyright © 2024 Howard F Farewell
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Meredith C Hartwell on 08/27/05 at 11:20 PM ::gives you a cookie:: <3 |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/30/05 at 04:55 PM subtle but so distinct. the vibrations are refined. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 08/30/05 at 08:51 PM Those last two lines are wonderful. Well the entire piece speaks with a soft and playful tone about this friendly competitive game. Lovely :-) |
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