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solstice

by Jim Benz

Moon
can’t lift itself from clouds
and the planets
won’t align
in the sunset so we drift
canoe
to the grassy shore
and swat mosquitoes ‘til
             the hill is climbed
             the fire lit
                       and night descends
                                    imperceptibly
                       above the trees

when wolves howl
across the bay
we know
the moon is free

08/26/2005

Author's Note: Published in TMP Irregular and Pralaton Literary Review

Posted on 08/26/2005
Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sarah Graves on 11/10/05 at 11:06 PM

Wonderful images you impose here, you bring this event to life for the reader. There is this freedom within nature that we can observe, it gives us the ability to dream and to discover. Great read, Jim. :)

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/22/05 at 02:17 AM

A great deal of emotion and sense of nature packed into this poem.

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