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tanka 9
by Paul Marinotaking the highway
out of downtown New Orleans
I turn back and gaze
at the aging Superdome
in need of a good sponge bath
08/26/2005 Posted on 08/26/2005
Copyright © 2024 Paul Marino
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 08/26/05 at 01:30 PM excellent. I can really see this. I love tanka also. |
| Posted by Uriel Tovar on 08/27/05 at 12:01 AM tonka does make good trucks |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/31/05 at 08:50 AM i don't know much about tanka, but the emotions, with just a touch of irony, i see in what you've written pull me to read more.
~Chelle~ |
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