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Construction Chick
by James ZealyMuscles Ripplin
Paints a drippin
Smoothly on the wall
Quick as Lightenin
Shes finishin
Strokin precise
As a surgeons knife
Decks Needin
Lottsa fixin
She can repair it
Or make it
Or stain it
Or nail it
Room s got no walls
Needs Sheet rock
Damn sure can hang it
Darn well can mud it
Makes it look nice
Even when nothin else is right
Matter of fact
Aint nothing she cant hack
Dog gone she gives no slack
Cuz by god she aint no hick
Shes The!!!!! Construction Chick
08/24/2005 Posted on 08/25/2005
Copyright © 2024 James Zealy
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/26/05 at 09:44 PM This is beautiful, James. I wanna be her!!!LOL |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/29/05 at 02:50 PM depicting a person rather than a scene inside out is a delicate job. And you did it in a poetic fashion. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/19/06 at 04:18 AM She sounds rough and ready. You've created a persona very well. I enjoyed the wordy construction of a female tech. I've worked with techs for about five years now but they've all been men. You did so well in this construction, as I was reading it, I was placing her in certain scenes from memory to see how she would have done with them. Quite a bit of fun. Wove your chick in quite nicely, in fact. Really enjoyed this. |
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