beer can haiku

by Jim Benz

last summer’s hammock
looks across a lake, empty
beer cans on the ground


Posted on 08/18/2005
Copyright © 2023 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 08/18/05 at 07:58 PM

I detect both a sense of melancholy and a sense of hope in this short piece. Hope that doesn't sound too poncey - I like the ambiguity.

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