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temptation is your vice

by Ava Blu



I know you think of me as disgusting
because I tell you about the
used tampon I was dared to touch
and how I didn’t mind it so much

and how I want to bathe in
a tub of your sweat;
washing my hair with your grease

or how I’d give anything
to watch a woman pee
standing up,

but when I say
I would lay in your cum for days,
touching my breasts, and
combing your scent through my hair,
you become aroused

which makes you oblivious
to how disgusting I really am

as I orgasm
on your
bleeding hands.

08/14/2005

Posted on 08/15/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Marcus Jones on 08/17/05 at 05:12 PM

whoa. just simply, whoa. unexpected phrasing pulled me in on this one. however, "ewwww!" just kidding! :)

Posted by Elle O'Connor on 11/19/05 at 03:09 AM

I have to agree with all the above~! I'm SO glad I found this piece, and maybe a little embarrassed to say it's going on my faves!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/15/09 at 01:02 AM

One of the definitive Ava Blu poems. Everything that makes you one of the best poets I know of is right here in this surreal, disturbing, relentlessly clever and powerful piece.

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