Clear the runway-
he's coming in-
like the ww2
Jap pilots bombing
a destroyer.
Duck! The Kamakaze smile-
white teeth like a piano
key board playing
"It Had to Be You",
with no drums for back-up
except for our heart beats.
Banzai my love, Banzai!!
08/11/2005
Awesome, Jane! :)
i love how you have described such a simple action with such colorful words!
wonderful blend of images and ideas...past and present, love and war...strong line breaks also...wonderful, happy to have read u...adding u to my friends list if that is ok...peace n love, jewels