by Jim Benz
seems to end
Posted on 08/11/2005
Copyright © 2020 Jim Benz
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Sarah Graves on 08/12/05 at 05:47 AM|
I enjoyed the structure here.. lol, it started with vodka too. You really bring the image to the surface for the reader to partake of. Great work..
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/12/05 at 04:36 PM|
Yes, seems to end with intoxication,with or without Vodka.
|Posted by Rula Shin on 08/12/05 at 04:44 PM|
Seems the beginning has much in common with the end. Very creative :-)