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Vodka

by Jim Benz

this poem
         inebriated and
swaying
      all over
              the
      page
          seems to end
with vodka


       pouring
             into
             a tall
             dirty
             glass

08/11/2005

Posted on 08/11/2005
Copyright © 2024 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Sarah Graves on 08/12/05 at 05:47 AM

I enjoyed the structure here.. lol, it started with vodka too. You really bring the image to the surface for the reader to partake of. Great work..

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/12/05 at 04:36 PM

Yes, seems to end with intoxication,with or without Vodka.

Posted by Rula Shin on 08/12/05 at 04:44 PM

Seems the beginning has much in common with the end. Very creative :-)

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