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Vodka

by Jim Benz

this poem
inebriated and
swaying
all over
the
page
seems to end
with vodka

pouring
into
a tall
dirty
glass

08/11/2005

Posted on 08/11/2005
Copyright © 2020 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sarah Graves on 08/12/05 at 05:47 AM

I enjoyed the structure here.. lol, it started with vodka too. You really bring the image to the surface for the reader to partake of. Great work..

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/12/05 at 04:36 PM

Yes, seems to end with intoxication,with or without Vodka.

Posted by Rula Shin on 08/12/05 at 04:44 PM

Seems the beginning has much in common with the end. Very creative :-)

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