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influence of the moon

by Jim Benz

there is an essence in us,
a vagrant,
a hold-up man,
a differentiation from Einstein, forever
one thing after another,
genetic text, confluent, spilled over
scenes, of copulation
hidden deep,
in stains
beneath your fine Bellini print.

the human soul itself expresses
herself, illuminates her devotions
on a woman, the age of 20,
smiling at Peter,
drinking deeply
from the water, of his transmutation
into fish, drunk godliness.

there is something terribly
intriguing about it,
the mystery and urge,
of this passion,
this paired transmutation, of man
from an eggman
into joys,
into the Lilith, seduction.

Fallen,
i just died in your arms
a crowing, a vertebrate drinking
from a shaft, of light
burst suddenly, like a vision
from a mass, from a mass
of dense organic compounds.

an old woman looking, young
then a screech, of brakes,
gives pause
to the vagrant muse, of immortality
he, of all things
he is the most disturbing.

08/09/2005

Author's Note: published in DISPATCH

Posted on 08/09/2005
Copyright © 2024 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Gleason on 08/09/05 at 11:47 PM

Good submission choice. Welcome to the club.

Posted by Sarah Graves on 08/10/05 at 03:02 AM

I enjoyed reading this, you really bring the reader into your emotions here.. great piece. Welcome to the cult.. hehe :)

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/10/05 at 05:04 PM

Yes,'there is an essence in us,......beneath your fine Bellini print ever surviving with this surviving instinct with possibility of many permutations and combinations, serving probably the purpose of nature as a energy refining machine enlivening the moon.

Posted by Ava Blu on 08/11/05 at 04:31 AM

no wonder you have so many votes. this stole my breath.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/11/05 at 07:32 AM

Jim, welcome to pathetic. I'm as amazed by the moon as I am by the images and meanings in your words. Just when I get used to poetic variations in styles, another one (yours) comes along that urges me to crack open my mind and take another look.
~Chelle~

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