I really like how this piece develops to the end. This woman knows no consequence of her actions, and she brings men down with her. Great read :)

...uriel, what a delightful full-face slap at us all, whores and whoremongers...it is a poignant description of life de right-here-right-now thingee and you captured it so well...you spin an existential web of man's obsession of/with sex and yet, myman, and yet it could easily pervert us...from true genuine love and all that stuff...growing up in the skin a male you get pelted with sex, sex, and while you're at it more sex...so when i read this i "see" alllll this and you penned it...so there, you have a wonderfully serious read here, goes deeper than the bone (pun intended!)...love this, peace, chaz

Deeply felt--clearly expressed--good poetry!