motion not with standing because your stilts could never reach that high.
08/04/2005
Posted on 08/04/2005Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu
Jeanna, the implied ride in your haiku is aided by separating "with" and "standing," when they could be one word. This way, interpretation is open to the reader's imagination. ~Chelle~
yeah, I especially like the author's note- very diva..