08/03 by Ava Blu
I think of green
on Wednesdays;
maybe its because of the lump
in my throat
when Ive tasted too much
of you.
08/03/2005
Author's Note: it feels like split-pea soup.
Posted on 08/03/2005 Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
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Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 08/05/05 at 03:00 AM mmm, this tastes like sugar on my tongue...haha, I love this! (and how do you make color?)..I love the first stanza.. and that last sentence is a gripper!(you win this round..haha) |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/05/05 at 03:21 AM Yes, the cause and the effect, causing an impression for this effect, this beautiful minimal |
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