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08/03

by Ava Blu



I think of green
on Wednesdays;

maybe it’s because of the lump
in my throat
when I’ve tasted too much
of you.

08/03/2005

Author's Note: it feels like split-pea soup.

Posted on 08/03/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 08/05/05 at 03:00 AM

mmm, this tastes like sugar on my tongue...haha, I love this! (and how do you make color?)..I love the first stanza.. and that last sentence is a gripper!(you win this round..haha)

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/05/05 at 03:21 AM

Yes, the cause and the effect, causing an impression for this effect, this beautiful minimal

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