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when i read her work

by Charlie Morgan



wish we were just lips and emotions,
no need for anymore form to our being.

swallowing each's breath, laden with
warm molecules of carbon, spent oxygen.

and nothing more, just bellow-breaths
of unjustified opposite emotions.

we could become.
we would become.

but presently our lips spew memories
of the mean streets of youth,

leading us into a dervish dance
of me, mine.

until we pile, in parallel stacks,
all our unused time.

trying to make a trade
for meaning.

08/03/2005

Posted on 08/03/2005
Copyright © 2025 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 09/02/07 at 01:41 AM

I will keep stacking until someone comes along to trade.....I know what ya mean.

Posted by A. Paige White on 09/24/07 at 01:50 PM

Congratulations on POTD, Chaz! That last line grabbed me. "trying to make a trade for meaning." Very thought provoking... Enjoyed this.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/25/07 at 12:55 AM

Excellent choice for POTD! Congratulations Chaz. I can feel the "dervish dance" and its wild rhythm.
~Chelle~

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