Reading this love serenade from the heart, here.. I for one, don't think you are lacking in the romantic department at all. What woman would not be moved to tears to read something like this from her heart flame? Filled with such tender emotions and intense passion all there, in every line and stanza. Very well done, very well, indeed... aloha to you and yours from out here, somewhere in the middle of the Pacific blue..;-)

Dave, I'd be doing a Snoopy Dance all over Hollywood if some guy wrote this for me and actually meant the words he was saying (yeah, instead of a prelude to sex). They are sweet, funny, romantic, goofy, honest, and vulnerable.
~Chelle~

These words are wonderfully sweet, honest, and humorous all at once. I hope that their recipient also loved them :)