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thirtieth.

by Melanie J Yarbrough

I'm peeking into July's demise-
but thinking of you, defending my honor
and following through;
always afraid the longer I wait
the farther I get from you.

07/30/2005

Posted on 07/30/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melanie J Yarbrough

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Paul Marino on 07/30/05 at 06:30 AM

this was really even and solid throughout, but the ending holds it beautifully. i sort of sat there for a second to absorb it. that's a good poem.

Posted by Shonda Creemer on 07/30/05 at 03:06 PM

wow Melanie ~ I keep on saying "my favorite" ~ and you keep on giving me new ones to call ~ love how this made me feel ~ :) Shon

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