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Seek out, my shining star...
by Howard F Farewell
I want to be mellow like the moon
Hanging low in its own dim reflecting light
Singing songs full of passion and mood
Sliding through the voice box of the night sky like honey
Til they touch down on the oh so lucky few who turn their heads
My what a sight! They move and sway like the ripples of the surf
Wanting one day to be so sweet. 07/28/2005 Posted on 07/28/2005
Copyright © 2025 Howard F Farewell
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Gleason on 07/28/05 at 04:18 PM ! This is good. Really good. Such a strange departure for you, but it fits. What a great image and your language is definitely maturing. Two thumbs up and an add to my favorites. |
| Posted by Meredith C Hartwell on 07/29/05 at 06:02 AM Instant favorite. Whatever complaints you've had about not being able to write? Well worth the wait! <3 |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/31/05 at 01:24 PM fantastic imagery and language. awesome read. |
| Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 07/31/05 at 05:34 PM Beautiful write. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 08/06/05 at 01:58 PM this is so beautiful... congrats on POTD... blessings... |
| Posted by Meredith C Hartwell on 08/07/05 at 02:32 AM Hooray for the well-deserved PotD! <3 |
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