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there is not much else to say on the matter.
by Melanie J YarbroughI feel wasted on you.
07/27/2005 Author's Note: so the title's longer than the poem. but after I wrote the first line, um, that's all there is, there isn't anymore.
Posted on 07/28/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melanie J Yarbrough
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 07/28/05 at 02:56 AM i like this; i think the title being longer adds to it. also, your author's note adds as well. turn the waste into something better, like i have done; keep purging and eventually it'll be gone. |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 07/28/05 at 06:36 AM it's pretty. it's so small. like it was over before the page fully loaded. but then when i sit here and look at it a second time i like it. oops, this comment is longer than your title and poem. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 08/01/05 at 01:39 AM hey, she said something not too different to me... yay. this is great though. |
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