Street Beat (Version 2)

by Omi Salavea

(Version 1 was lost the first time Pathetic.org ever crashed big time. This is what i can remember, barely).

Street Beat
War Torn
gun shots muffle
the cries of those unborn
asphalt jungle, many call it
Where urban hatred roams.


Author's Note: i really wish i had the original, it was alot better.

Posted on 07/25/2005
Copyright © 2019 Omi Salavea

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/30/06 at 08:10 PM

I too was devastated by the crash, but think I have it all back. City life at times is the pits. You write of it well...Charlie

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