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i hope you believe me,,

by Brynn Dizack

let me write, for a moment,
about your body.

i. you are not thin.

not round like v., or heidi, or margaret,
but thicker than i am used to.
listen:
i find such comfort in the weight of you.
your hips press me deeply into my own spine,
into the mattress, into the floor.
i buckle almost, under the sandbags of your breasts.

but this is incorrect-
'sandbag' implies rough burlap and flecked stone,
stageropes, anticipation, war, tense silence.
it can not denote the pillowsoft weight
of flesh,
the bonecolored skin,
the tiny hair follicles, where
the sweat && dirt of the day
collects.

ii. you are not short.

not towering, like evan, or elizabeth, or levi.
but taller than i am used to.
watch:
the length of your body
from your cheek
to your ankle
(where i will stop)
is comprised of miles and miles.

the walk is lovely-
i will never grow weary.


07/21/2005

Posted on 07/22/2005
Copyright © 2024 Brynn Dizack

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anita Mac on 07/22/05 at 01:33 AM

I had an English teacher once who pointed out that everything we perceive we compare to something/someone else... You could get lost trying to find something you didn't. I like that about this, I think. You're style's changing again; I like the direction, though.

Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 07/24/05 at 08:17 AM

beautiful.

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