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The Blind Date

by David Hill

Arranged by an extremely ex-friend
this blind date, how I wish I were blind!

“He loves me…”

Dress:
Stinging citrus
day-glo splatters
of blobs and globs
hurled in hatred.

““he loves me not…”

Nose:
Chewed and mangled
soccer field sod
bulbous and beaded,
a single hair sprout
begging a “plink.”

““he loves me…”

Hair:
Permed and puffed
dandelion dry
seed head
blowball.

““he loves me not…”

Hat:
A Tropical platter
of piled spilling fruits
and ostrich plumes.
Waving palm trees in
plastic splendor,
dripping and drooling
engulfing her head
in lion tamer finale’.

““he loves me…”

Harpy:
Girlishly
plucking petals,
she flutters mascara lashes
shadowed in shifting berries.
Silently I pray for this finish,
a phlegm rattle giggle of:

““…he loves me not!”

07/21/2005

Author's Note: Looks are everything.

Posted on 07/22/2005
Copyright © 2026 David Hill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anita Mac on 07/22/05 at 01:38 AM

ouch!... But I love it, actually. It's so true. You're descriptions are so vivid... And the way you break them up just brings it all together.

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