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when clouds kiss
by Ava Bluit once took 9 hours to find love;
now it only takes 2
I am surrounded by an embrace
that once pushed me aside
your hair against the back of my neck
sends spiderwebs of lust up my leg
envelope my core deep in your mouth
you have coerced my fingers around you
I yield,
prey for you;
communion precedes
your eyes glaze over
like mist from a summer rain
as the rays from my lips
send a tinge of power
our bodies recoil
as sweet moisture drips
together,
the world will bow to our
oscillating passion.
07/19/2005 Author's Note: hmm...maybe/maybe not...
[for Josh]
Posted on 07/19/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 07/20/05 at 12:56 AM Way to bust out the sexiness... Seriously, you just have this way of phrasing things so perfectly that there's no doubt the sensations you're writing about, like "sends spiderwebs of lust up my leg" LOVE that! It's so in the moment... |
| Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 07/21/05 at 02:30 AM "spiderwebs of lust up my leg" --i know that feeling. i love the diction here.. great job! :) |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 11/05/10 at 05:45 PM when clouds *$&#$&A*#&#* ! is more like it :) |
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